Monday, May 30, 2011

Untitled!

So, as some of you may know, I'm on inkpop quite a lot. I was talking to RahRahAnn the other day about how there are no stories about emo boys out there. So we figured, why not write one of our own? So that's what we're doing! We're calling it "Untitled" like the Simple Plan song, which actually relates to it in a way. (I think, if/when I post it on inkpop, I'll put the lyrics up as part of it. I don't know though..... what do you think?)
Anyways, here's what I've written so far, I wanted to do some more, but I should really shower, and I have performance of Twelfth Night tomorrow so it'll be a busy day and I don't wanna smell bad....
Oh, and just so you know, the main character and I are actually dating! (I need a life, God) and his best friend is chasing after RahRahAnn... so I wouldn't try to steal them if I were you ;)
So, without further ado, here is the little beginning piece of "Untitled"!! YAY! (this is the part when you erupt into applause like on the Oprah show or Dr.Oz or something)

Chapter One
                They said they’d be back by eleven, damn liars.
                I did what any sensible person would do. I waited until eleven.
                Then twelve. Whatever, I had thought, as long as they bring me something back it’s okay.
                Then it was one. I waited longer, occupying myself with books, television and music.
                And then it was two. They showed up a while after the long hand hit the three. I plastered a smile on my face as they entered the main room.
                “Hi honey,” My mother said. Her words were slurred. I sighed, but she didn’t seem to notice.
                “Hello son,” My dad added. I nodded in his general direction, letting my dark hair cover my face.
                “We’ll be going to bed now, Lys honey, so don’t stay up too late.” Mom muttered, letting Dad drape his arm around her and lead her up the stairs.  I turned off the TV and went to get a glass of water.
                About a half hour later, when I was sure they were asleep, I went upstairs.  I worked quickly, stuffing all the necessities into a bag I found in my closet. After grabbing everything I could possibly need, I went back downstairs. I grabbed the car keys from the hall table and rushed into the garage.
                I threw my bag into the back seat and put the car into drive. And I was never coming back.
                That’d teach my parents not to forget their son’s eighteenth birthday.
XXX
 Keep in mind it's the first draft, it might suck, yadda yadda yadda. But yeah... I don't know. Maybe I'll never get around to finishing this (like I do with everything else) maybe it'll be a huge success (yeah right!) or maybe it'll teach me some things about trying not to be so pessimistic! 

But yes, if it sucks, please tell me. I don't want to be writing complete shit without knowing :/ 
ENJOY!